Damn nice intro
I love the melody of the intro. I think at 00:30 should come a next element in it. Make the sound wider (like with a stereo effect). Wow nice melody on it at 1:00 too! I love this stuff man. The sound isn't very good, but I think you'll do better in the future. Sounds very filmish. Make the drum a little clearer later on. It's nice as an intro to a clearer drum part, but not all the way. The piano sounds a little dull too, try to put more high EQ's on it and some reverb would be nice.
Wow man, but I love the composition :) I would really like to hear this in nicer mixing quality! PM me if you have made another version. If you've made this with FL studio I can help you with the mixing. Just PM me then.
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