ValorousFogey's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lost Again...]

Oh yeah man!

F-ing awesome loop! Please make a whole track out of it and PM me if it's done! I love the atmosphere and sound!

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[Dream Land (calm techno)]

Hi there!

I love the sound man! Great melodies and good use of instruments! Very spacey, makes me happy! :) I only think you should turn the bell-synth stuff a little down in volume, and the kick just a littttle bit up. But very happy good feeling stuff! :)

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Yamalazoo88 responds:

Ok thanks for the advise! I will check out your music!!

[{-^MP^-} The Only Way Is Up!]

Sick guitar indeed!

Funky stuff! I love it! Great professional stuff! :)

I'll let my friend hear this, he'll love it! He plays the guitar himself.

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Musical-Pants responds:

Thanks, I worked hard on the quality for this one.
And I'll give you a listen!

-Pants

[Ripple In The Poop]

Maybe you're right

Ah well... at least it's original (like my stuff, check it out!)

[Sonic - Chemical Plant Remix]

Yeah man!

Alright, nice arrangement and nice rhytms. Though you should put the bass of the kick just a littttttle bit up I think. But damn good mix and stuff! Keep it up! :)

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See ya

[Black Clouds Above Me]

Damn nice intro

I love the melody of the intro. I think at 00:30 should come a next element in it. Make the sound wider (like with a stereo effect). Wow nice melody on it at 1:00 too! I love this stuff man. The sound isn't very good, but I think you'll do better in the future. Sounds very filmish. Make the drum a little clearer later on. It's nice as an intro to a clearer drum part, but not all the way. The piano sounds a little dull too, try to put more high EQ's on it and some reverb would be nice.

Wow man, but I love the composition :) I would really like to hear this in nicer mixing quality! PM me if you have made another version. If you've made this with FL studio I can help you with the mixing. Just PM me then.

Good luck and check out my stuff!

headbang87 responds:

it's a raw version I've made in about 5-10 minutes ^^ I'll work on this anyway, and yes I made this with FL, if you have suggestions aboout the mixing just send a PM to me, the drums aren't a problem to change, just as the piano
thanks for reviewing helpfully and for enjoying :)
EDIT: changed the song

[yet more trance!]

Hi!

A few tips and tricks:

Put the kick up a little and a compressor over it with more bass. Put the drum a little down (and the hi-hats in a stereo field). Put the piano down also and don't use it while the main synth is playing. The piano musn't be the main thing of the piece, let us hear that it's about the nice ravey synth! The synth by the way sounds damn cool! Nice melody in it too. Pretty good arrangement. Overall nice song, but change the mixing a bit.

Good luck,

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MZizzlez responds:

K thanks. This is my first actual attempt at trance, so that's a giant help!

[Cyberpunk]

Interesting effects

But sorry, it sounds a bit weird to me. The melodies are very interesting and that's what I like about it, but the whole mixing is just of low quality I'm afraid, but you're going in the right direction! I hope you like constructive criticism!
Put more High on the master and a little bass off. It sounds a bit chaotic in the mix like this.

Nice idea and melody, just not such good quality.

See ya, good luck

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ElectricDiarrhea responds:

Yeah, i was afraid of that. I originally had it at an okay quality, but had to turn it down for Newgrounds, unfortunately I chucked the original song file and blah blah blah excuses. Anyway thanks for the comment.

[OptimasPrimeViolatingaToaster]

Oooeeeh tension.

I love the intro. It sounds a bit simple, but the tension feeling is great!! At 00:51 I expected to kick a very fast DNB like rhytm in with a big climax, but the climax just comes too late.. Just delete a few bars of the intro! Also.. The kick sounds too distorted, much too hard. Just turn the whole thing down a bit.

See ya, good luck.

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ElectricDiarrhea responds:

I'm sorry I didn't climax quick enough for ya. ;D

[Right Here, Right Now (Remix)]

Well..

Sounds very spacey and meditizing, but it's dull in sounds quality. Try to work on that, because the rest is very potentional! Good stuff overall.

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See ya